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Everyone dreams of
falling in love
Everyone dreams of
The One
We plan and we dream
Of how it will be
What he'll say and
When we'll cry
We plan every detail
Even to what he wears
But when it happens
Nothing's as planned
He doesn't have on the
Suit you dreamed
But instead his favorite
Baseball cap and jeans
But You actually like him
Better this way
He doesn't say what
You planned
But instead he speaks
His heart
And you find it was more
Than you dreamed of
You didn't cry at the end
Like you said you would
Instead you cried when
He got on his knee
All the dreams and plans
We have are great...
But they compare nothing
at all to The Real Thing.
©2002-2009 ~effendi
:iconeffendi:

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Everyone dreams of "the one" and how everything will happen but it never happens that way...but yet it is better than your dreams.

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:iconmagickpixie:
Aww, I love it, it caputure something, and the way you word t- amazing!
:iconronthepirate:
I can't even say words that tell how great this poem is. This is far above words like "superior", "amazing", "wonderful", or "magnificent". Fav.

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Life is a beautiful thing if you can have the extremes of attempting suicide and then falling love all in a week.
:iconjoe-schmoe:
wow great poem, and i love the way u did this, and the idea of it is great, and unique, poetry at it's best here.

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"at 4 in the morning you know where i'll be... im running red lights asleep at the wheel"
:iconneywon:
Simply beautiful and true. What more is there to say, Great work.
:iconfrozeneyes:
beautiful angel! absolutely lovely!! you are so wonderful! this piece is precious. it is so sweet. i can't wait to see more. Heart

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*Rather than love, than money, than fame, give me truth. I sat at a table where were rich food and wine in abundance, an obsequious attendance, but sincerity and truth were not; and
I went away hungry from the inhospitable board.* H. D. Thoreau
:iconflamingrose:
WOW this is SO amazing.

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to you whom I never met
and yet somehow I love
... all my love and adoration.

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